FOREIGN MINISTER
To :
THE PURPOSE OF THIS CABLE IS TO CONFIRM THE TELEPHONE CONVERSATION EXCHANGED BETWEEN COUNSELLOR CHOI AND DIRECTOR OF POLITICAL AFFAIRS BUREAU ON SATURDAY EVENING TO MAKE CORRECTION OF SOME TYPING AND GRAMMATICAL MISTAKES FOUND LATER IN THE FINAL DRAFT DOCUMENTS SUBMITTED TO THE GOVERNMENT BY AMBASSADOR KIM BY FRIDAY POUCH PD
POINT ONE REGARDING DOCUMENT NO ONE COLON
SUBITEM A PD THE TITLE OF THE MEMORANDUM SHOULD BE AMENDED AS FOLLOWS WITHOUT UNDERLING COLON MEMORANDUM OF UNDERSTANDING BETWEEN THE GOVERNMENT OF THE REPUBLIC OF KOREA AND THE GOVERNMENT OF JAPAN REGARDING MEASURES ON JAPANESE FISHERMEN DETAINED IN KOREA AND ON KOREAN RESIDENTS IN JAPAN DETAINED UNDER DEPORTATION ORDERS PD
SUBITEM B PD THE WORDS QUOTE AT THE ALIENS DETENTION CAMPS OF JAPAN UNQUOTE SHOULD BE AMENDED AS FOLLOWS COLON AT THE ALIENS DETENTION CAMPS IN JAPAN PD
SUBITEM C PD THE WORDS QUOTE AT THE ALIENS DETENTION CAMP OF KOREA UNQUOTE SHOULD BE AMENDED AS FOLLOWS COLON AT THE ALIENS DETENTION CAMP IN KOREA PD
POINT TWO REGARDING DOCUMENT NO TWO PD
SUBITEM A PD THE WORDS QUOTE THE OVERALL TALKS BETWEEN JAPAN AND KOREA UNQUOTE SHOULD BE AMENDED AS FOLLOWS COLON THE OVERALL TALKS BETWEEN THE REPUBLIC OF KOREA AND JAPAN PD
SUBITEM B PD THE WORDS QUOTE RESUMED FROM JUNE ETC UNQUOTE SHOULD BE AMENDED AS FOLLOWS COLON RESUMED FROM SEPTEMBER ETC PD
SUBITEM C PD THE TITLE OF THE ANNEXED UNDERSTANDING WILL HAVE NO UNDERLINE AND PLEASE PUT THE WORD CAPITALIZED CONFIDENTIAL WITH UNDERLINE ON THE LEFT UPPER SIDE OF THE PAPER PD
POINT THREE REGARDING DOCUMENT NO THREE AGREED MINUTES PD SUBITEM A PD THE TITLE WILL BE WITHOUT UNDERLINE AND PLEASE PUT THE WORD CAPITALIZED CONFIDENTIAL WITH UNDERLINE ON THE UPPER LEFT SIDE OF THE FIRST PAGE OF THE DOCUMENT PD
SUBITEM B PD AS REGARDS THE FIRST PARA OF THE FIRST PAGE CMA THE WORDS QUOTE KOREAN RESIDENTS IN JAPAN UNDER DEPORTATION ORDERS UNQUOTE SHOULD BE AMENDED AS FOLLOWS COLON THE KOREAN RESIDENTS IN JAPAN DETAINED UNDER DEPORTATION ORDERS PD
SUBITEM C PD ON PAGE TWO PD COLONS WHICH ARE PUT AFTER BASIC RELATIONS CMA STATUS AND TREATMEMT OF KOREAN RESIDENTS AND FISHERIES AND QUOTE PEACE LINE UNQUOTE SHOULD BE STRUCK OUT PD AND PLEASE CAPITALIZE THE LETTER R OF BASIC RELATIONS PD
SUBITEM D PD ON PAGE THREE PD PLEASE INSERT THE WORDS QUOTE DATED JUNE SUCH AND SUCH CMA ONE NINE FIVE SEVEN UNQUOTE BETWEEN CLAIMS SETTLEMENT QUOTATION MARK AND THE WORDS THE GOVERNMENT OF THE REPUBLIC OF KOREA IS ALSO OF THE SAME ETC PD
POINT FOUR REGARDING DOCUMENT NO FOUR PD
PLEASE CAPITALIZE THE LETTER D OF CHIEF JAPANESE DELEGATE CMA THE LETTER D OF THE KOREAN DELEGATION CMA THE LETTER D OF THE JAPANESE DELEGATION AND THE LETTER T OF THE JAPAN-KOREA TALKS PD AND PUT COMMA BETWEEN THE WORD CHIEF JAPANESE DELEGATE AND THE WORDS ON OCTOBER ETC PD
POINT FIVE REGARDING DOCUMENT NO FIVE PD
THE TITLE OF THE MEMORANDUM SHOULD BE WITHOUT UNDERLINE PD AND PLEASE PUT ARTICLE THE BEFORE THE WORD PLACE OF THE FIRST PARA OF THE MEMORANDUM FD
POINT SIX REGARDING DOCUMENT NO SIX ORAL STATEMENT PD
THE WORDS WILL TURN OVER TO KOREA ETC SHOULD BE AMENDED AS THE WORDS WILL TURN OVER TO THE REPUBLIC OF KOREA ETC PD AND PLEASE PUT THE CAPITALIZED CONFIDENTIAL ON THE LEFT UPPER SIDE OF THE DOCUMENT PD
POINT SEVEN REGARDING JOINT COMMUNIQUE PD
SUBITEM A PD REGARDING FIRST PARA PD THE WORDS QUOTE THOSE KOREANS WHO ARE DETAINED AT THE ALIENS DETENTION CAMPS IN JAPAN AND WHO HAVE BEEN RESIDING IN JAPAN SINCE PRIOR TO THE END OF WORLD WAR II UNQUOTE SHOULD BE
AMENDED AS QUOTE THOSE KOREANS WHO HAVE BEEN RESIDING
IN JAPAN SINCE PRIOR TO THE END OF WORLD WAR II AND WHO ARE BEING DETAINED AT THE ALIENS DETENTION CAMPS IN JAPAN UNQUOTE PD
SUBITEM B PD REGARDING SECOND PARA PD PLEASE STRIKE OUT COMMAS AFTER THE WORDS AT THE SAME TIME AND THE WORDS THE STATEMENT OF THE UNITED STATES GOVERNMENT PD AND THE WORDS ITS PROPERTY CLAIMS AGANIST KOREA WHICH WAS MADE ON MARCH ETC SHOULD BE AMENDED AS THE WORDS THE CLAIM TO PROPERTY IN KOREA MADE BY THE JAPANESE DELEGATION AT THE KOREA-JAPAN TALKS ON MARCH ETC PD
SUBITEM C PD THE WORDS QUOTE WILL BE RESUMED ON SEPTEMBER 2 CMA ONE NINE FIVE SEVEN IN TOKYO UNQUOTE SHOULD BE AMENDED AS THE WORDS QUOTE WILL BE RESUMED IN TOKYO ON SEPTEMBER 2 CMA ONE NINE FIVE SEVEN PD UNQUOTE PD
POINT EIGHT PD
ALL THESE CORRECTIONS WERE MADE AT THE ADMINISTRATIVE LEVEL TALKS HELD BETWEEN BOTH SIDES ON JUNE 15 FOR THE PURPOSE OF PROOF READING OF THE FINAL DRAFT DOCUMENTS PD
AMBASSADOR KIM